This tile is from Newbies 18: Our Improved Flavor Might Surprise You!

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By: Mbackhouse

Checked out at: November 13, 2002

Checked in at: November 13, 2002

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SpiderX

looking good...

Hey, you definitely have drawing skills. It looks like you should have spent more time on your drawing though. Filling it in with some color would help tremendously. It would have only taken 10 more minutes.

Mantic

Re: looking good...

I kinda like the contrast of the line art here, and the lead-outs were interesting. I got one of the adjacent tiles and was very tempted to continue in a line art style (I ultimately compromised by transitioning to a cartoon style with some colour).

This is a cool tile and I give it a 4 only because it does look a little rushed :)

SpiderX

Re: Re: looking good...

Well, he only spent *at max* 20 minutes on it. You can verify that by looking at the check out / check in times. So, spend some more time on it, and you'd get a 5.

miskate

Re: Re: Re: looking good...

not necessarily (although I think in this case you're right)... I've had a lot of tiles expire on me while I was working on them. You just keep refreshing until you get the same border back so you can check it out again.

Kierrato

I like the style =]

I think this drawing is a nice one , it has a somewhat tatoo-ish (ah erm , nice word no ?) mood that I like !

As said before , maybe including color next time even if its so small of an addition , only part of the shadows for exemple , would do great !
Also maybe add a background for future tile workers to havea better start-off ? =]

gj !